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Sharron Bassano's avatar

So poignant, the relationship between these two young men. Poor Tommy. I am sensing doom... and Jude sees it too, and is helpless.

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

thanks Sharron. you are definitely right of course, i simply hope I nail it with the landing.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

I have every confidence in you.

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Joan Spilman's avatar

Okay, I'm hooked.

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

good to hear joan! thanks for reading!

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Tracy's avatar

Well damn! Sure would have liked to see how this turned out! Great story, well written, insightful with that Catcher in the Rye or A Separate Peace vibe. Well edited too- only found one type-o. Great work!! 🥰🥰

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

Thanks for reading Tracy. If you'd like to keep reading you can get a paid subscription and hopefully just cancel when you're done (until my next novel comes out!)

If that's too much for you, no problem!

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Tracy's avatar

I have not subscribed to anyone yet, though soooo tempted to do so! Trying to keep the costs of my obsessions down 🤣🤣Actually, I am more open to a one time purchase than initiating a subscription here- do you sell your books purchasable on kindle!?

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