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Jenn's avatar

Oof. Alcohol plus adolescence 🤣. A very good chapter! I was as immersed as Jude in the deep end.

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

always a great combo, alcohol and adolescence. thanks for reading, Jenn, as ever.

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My pleasure!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Ah... "love is love".... but you sure dredged up some weird memories for me, Clancy. ... Thanks. I think.

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

hahah uh oh! hope you're ok Sharron!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

👍🏻

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Keith Long's avatar

Oh no, the lightning strikes again! Sad… also I read somewhere the ostriches don’t actually stick their heads underground, just near it — to hear or something, I forget. Not even sure it’s true honestly.

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

the lightning strikes indeed...maybe I took some artistic license with the ostrich thing hahah! thanks Keith

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Feb 9
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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

the Goodspeeds definitely have a housecleaner, if not a roomba!

nailing the era is, apparently, what I do best! thanks EK!

"Gatsby-esque feel transposed to early 2000s high school" has got to be one of my favorite compliments. there IS something Gatsby-ish about Tommy, isn't there?

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Feb 28
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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

yes I think even their characterization and motives aside, I was rather inspired by a great, larger than life type character being observed by a more passive and ordinary one

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